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The FanFic Critic teams up with XArcangelAssassinX once again to take on a Pokemon fanfiction by the author of Pikapoon. Will this story prove to be worse than its predecessor? If so, can XArcangelAssassinX prevent the FanFic Critic from going completely nuts or will she only make matters worse? And Susan? What role will she play in today's episode? Find out in this exciting, action-packed season finale!

Story URL:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6679180/1/Timeless_Lust

Posted by The FanFic Critic on June 2, 2012 at 12:01 PM

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Reply The FanFic Critic

08:29 PM on June 03, 2012 

BigBlackHatMan says...
Wow, this was an awful story. Incest and pedophilia in one block of freaking awful. I admit that I had a hard time even listening to the reading of this story as I just can't wrap my mind around anyone who thinks this is appropriate. This author needs to have be checked for a nasty disorder.

I guess the story is something I am just getting in to, but it seems decent. Good work

Thanks!

Reply BigBlackHatMan

01:06 PM on June 02, 2012 

Wow, this was an awful story. Incest and pedophilia in one block of freaking awful. I admit that I had a hard time even listening to the reading of this story as I just can't wrap my mind around anyone who thinks this is appropriate. This author needs to have be checked for a nasty disorder.

I guess the story is something I am just getting in to, but it seems decent. Good work