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In Too Deep: Is One More Day Really That Bad?

Posted by Ratin8tor on July 16, 2012 at 5:15 PM

Hello and welcome to In Too Deep, where I over-analyse a certain section of pop culture.

 

Since it's my 100th blog on Manic Expression I thought I'd go retro this week and publish my very first one on here. It's an oldie but a goodie, the blog that started it all. Without further ado enjoy.

 

Ah Spider-Man. Isn't his life stuff just full of woe. Broke, lives with his aunt, almost killed every day, is socially awkward. It's a wonder the guy ever managed to get a girlfriend. It's even more of a wonder that he got married.

 

But Spider-Man, like all great tragedies, isn't built on happiness. No, there comes a time where life must kick him in the balls and push him back down. And in one such instance it cost him both his marriage and his unborn child.

 

First, some back story. Spider-Man, aka Peter Parker, gained superpowers after being bitten by a radioactive spider (back in the days when radioactivity couldn't give you cancer). He ends up falling for a supermodel, Mary Jane Watson, and the two got married in 1987.

 

Skip forward 20 years and the writers get tired of Peter Parker being a married man, so they decide to end the relationship. But since divorce is too ugly a word, they instead have him sell his marriage and unborn child to the Marvel representation of the Devil.

 

Wait what?

 

Yes, that's right. Peter gives up his marriage and his unborn daughter, all so that Aunt May (who had been shot in the story Back in Black) could live and his secret identity (he publicly revealed himself in Civil War, something I'll come to later) become... secret.

 

Needless to say, fans were outrage. It was such a stupid, trivial idea that goes against everything that character stood for.

 

Or did it? Join me as I (vainly) try and defend One More Day, and to prove why it might be a good thing.

 

Lets start off with our main man, Peter Parker. He tends to have a 'Hero's Complex'. He will never, ever back down from a fight. Which is great, since it shows how courages and heroic he can be when he's fighting the Juggernaut. However this isn't all good. It's in our very nature to either 'fight or flight'. Those that lived to pass on the genes were the ones that knew it was foolish to take on the tiger in the jungle.

 

Peter doesn't have these instincts. He makes everything his responsibility, his problem. It's his job to help everyone, no matter what. If he could he'd be out there 24/7 saving the day.

 

… Which would result in living his wife and baby defenceless. Don't get me wrong, Mary Jane is a very capable woman. It's just that Green Goblin or Doc Ock are very powerful villains. And they don't even know who Spider-Man really is. Not to, say, Venom.

 

Spider-Man would face a truly tough decision. Does he either a)go out to save everyone or b)focus on keeping his child safe. Either way he feels like he is doing the wrong thing. Do we really believe that Peter Parker could balance the responsibility of being both a father and Spider-Man?

 

This leads me onto my next point. Mary Jane isn't the first girl to catch his eyes, no sir. He first had his heart set on blonde bombshell Gwen Stacy, who he had a relationship with. Tragically (since this is a Spider-Man story), the Green Goblin kidnapped her and dropped her off a bridge. To add extra pathos, it could have been Spider-Man's webbing catching her foot in mid fall that might have snapped her neck. Whilst it has never been made official, Spider-Man does carry around the knowledge that he killed his girlfriend.

 

Surely that must go through the back of his mind, when he's around Mary Jane. Surely he must fear that is only a matter of time before the situation happens again. Not only that, but his child would be even more defenceless then Mary Jane. He would never be able to live with the responsibility of it.

 

I admit, it sounds like I made the same point twice. So lets move onto another point. The fact that he saved his Aunt May. Now some argue that she already had one foot in the grave, so saving her wasn't going to be much in the long one. But lets look at it from Peter's perspective. This woman was effectively his mother; and raised him when he was all alone in the world. He still feels indebted to her kindness, and would do anything for her. Not to mention he already let his uncle get shot, because he refused to stop a robber. It was the day that made him Spider-Man, whilst also making him wish he could have saved his uncle. Now, presented in the same situation and offered the choice, is it any surprise he took it?

 

Was it the right move to do? No, in my opinion. But did it fit in with his character? Yes, to a certain degree.

 

The other condition of the deal was for his secret identity to become secret again. Now bear in mind, it was revealing his identity that caused Aunt May to be shot in the first place. Furthermore, it also showed that his family would never be completely safe, no matter what he tried to do. Whilst he knew he was giving up a great sacrifice, he did it to try and protect the ones he cared about most. To try and let them live a safer life.

 

So we've come to the station of this train of the thought, and what have we got out of it? 1)Peter has fears for the safety of others; and feels that he couldn't carry out his responsibilities if he had a child. 2)Aunt May meant more to him then Mary Jane, since he looked at it at a chance of fixing a past mistake. 3)It would provide a way of keeping his loved ones safe.

 

Now do I like One More Day? No, no I do not. I think it ruins everything the characters stand for; as well as future story ideas. If I were to write it, I'd have done it differently. I'd have Spider-Man fight some dimensional villain threatening to destroy earth. Peter is presented with a problem: if he defeats the villain, his marriage will never have happened and whatnot. Peter knows of this, but decides to do the right thing and save the world, even at his own personal cost. Then, you'd begin a new story arc (or arcs), rebuilding the romance between Mary Jane and Peter Parker.

 

One More Day is bad, really bad. Who's to blame for it? In the real world it's Joe Quesada, in the Marvel Universe it's Mephisto. For those that don't know, this guy is basically the devil. The ultimate in evil. Vile scum.

 

… So doesn't it make perfect sense that he would strike Peter at his weakest moment, taking from him the most cherished possession? Remember poor Peter is under a lot of stress; and Mephisto is manipulating him. Sure, it doesn't look like that he gets anything out of the bargain. But he gets to make Peter and Mary Jane suffer; and isn't that what the Prince of Darkness would want? Suffering for as many as possible?

 

I hope you enjoyed my ramble, feel free to leave you own comments and opinions. This is Pretty Boy, signing out.

 

So there you have it. My first ever blog for the series. If you disagree with anything, or have anything to add, feel free to leave a comment. Till next time.

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6 Comments

Reply Chris Lang
11:34 AM on July 17, 2012 
There's still no way to justify One More Day on a storytelling level. It's just so forced and just so stupid. Personally, I think Peter's revealing his secret identity during Civil War was out of character -- so all of this comes as a consequence of something that was out of character for Peter to begin with.

Why do I think the unmasking was out of character? It's because Peter KNOWS that his enemies will target him through his loved ones. And he's smart enough ... (record needle scratch).

Wait wait. This is the Peter Parker who comes from a universe where 'The Gathering of Five/Final Chapter' (or, as I like to call it, 'Final CRAPter') occured. In that world, Peter's so stupid he makes Homer Simpson at his most idiotic look like Albert Einstein.

And while I'm on the subject, 'The Final CRAPter' is WORSE than One More Day. It in fact paved the way for One More Day. If I ever do a series of columns on Spider-Man comic books, I'll probably describe the whole thing ... if I can bring myself to revisit that hate crime against people with brains. Just thinking about it gives me a headache.

Anyway, to get back to where I was before the digression, Peter Parker, when he's written by writers who respect his intelligence, is smart enough to know that revealing his secret identity would be an incredibly dangerous thing for him to do. And he can't just trust that Tony Stark would keep his family safe. But that's the reason he does it. And sure enough, he has a falling out with Tony Stark meaning no more protection from Stark, and sure enough his loved ones get put in danger.

The whole setup is contrived. One More Day is, as I stated in my Fanfic Subgenres: The Fix Fic article (if you haven't read it, I recommend that you do) a fix fic of the bad kind. Mephisto's whole deal is ludicrous. He doesn't want their souls, he wants their marriage? Could the story have been any MORE forced?

I don't think so. Joe Quesada might as well have inserted himself into the story and told Peter and Mary Jane that he considers their marriage a crime against the characters, had them tried in a kangaroo court with him as the judge, jury, and 'executioner', and then had him 'execute' the marriage. Because really, there's NO pretense that anything that happens in the story from that point on is happening for ANY other reason than 'Joe Quesada wanted it to happen that way'.

Oh, and NO ONE being able to heal Aunt May's wound other than Mephisto was just SO contrived. Mutant healers ... nope. Sorcerer Supreme ... nope. But Mephisto ... sure, if you give up your marriage.

Not that I actually own a copy of 'One More Day', though. I quit the 616 Spider-books after 'The Final CRAPter' and have not spent money on them since. But I have kept up with them, and I have actually seen them (flipping through them in the stores and putting them back in disgust). But if 'The Final CRAPter' hadn't made me quit, then One More Day certainly would have.
Reply Les
11:59 PM on July 16, 2012 
Hi Ratin8tor. Your first blog was aimed at the fence, my friend. Your arguments were well stated, but, I'd have to say with that sort of decision nightmare, Peter Parker has to be considered the Job of the Marvel Universe.....can't this guy EVER get a break? I think, he should've let Aunt May go gracefully and save her dignity, but I can understand the impact of grief to cloud a choice like this. Good article. Peace.
Reply Ratin8tor
09:24 PM on July 16, 2012 
I don't know. Different people cope with grief differently.

But perhaps he wants to save Aunt May not just because she's his aunt, but because she represents Uncle Ben, Gwen Stacey and all the other lives he's failed to save. Aunt May is just the latest in love ones that have snuffed it near Peter and it has come to the point where he wants it to stop. There is a lot of emotional buildup in Peter's history where he's lost those he has loved, so it's not surprising he makes a deal with a devil. Had Mesphito made the same offer to save Gwen Stacy or Uncle Ben, would Spider-Man have accepted it? I think he would have. Remember his perfect life is married to Gwen Stacy and having his Uncle Ben alive.

But again, Peter had an emotional breakdown. That's why I like the character. There are times when he makes mistakes because he's not perfect. No normal human is. I can totally see him going into a depression over it cos, well, why wouldn't he?

Also I never got why people thought realism = dark and gritty/kill supervillains. Cops don't kill everyone they arrest, why would superheroes be any different?
Reply DisneyOtoko
08:58 PM on July 16, 2012 
Human yes, relatable yes, but it still doesn't even come close to justifying the story.
Also if I were in that position I would stand by what I said. Why? Because I've been in a situation similar. When my grandfather died last year I felt the same pain that everyone else feels in that I didn't want him to leave us and if there was a way to save him ( which there wasn't)I would most certainly take it, but my grandfather braced himself and accepted his fate(he was 91) and had his honor and pride and would never want anyone doing such a stupid thing just to make him live a few more years. I realized that it wasn't about me and it should never be about me, but about the memories good and bad and how knowing him and loving him has made me to be a better person above such selfish notions and effected all who got the privilege to meet him. I would never compromise my ideals as a human being for such fleeting gains and one that would disrespect the very person I claim to love. My Grandfather was designated babysitter with Grandma so he was a second father so it was very hard for me if someone as weak willed and powerless as me can cope and move on there's absolutely NO EXCUSE why Peter couldn't especially with his experiences!

Besides if Peter is so realistic why doesn't he end up like the superheroes in Watchmen and kill supervillains that's what a realistic superhero would do. Also Aunt May has died at least twice and he didn't have such an immature cow. The thing is people cope with death and reflect and think and cry they DON'T have childish outbursts and moping his reaction isn't even close to realistic.
Reply Ratin8tor
08:29 PM on July 16, 2012 
@DisneyOtoko

So because Spider-Man takes the realistic and human response of trying to save someone he loved, that makes him a terrible character? I challenge you to be in the same position where you have a chance to save a love one and not taking it, especially when it's the woman who has raised you all your life.

Oh sure it was selfish, but that's because it was also a totally human reaction. The reason why Spider-Man got so popular was because he wasn't a God amonst Men, but a teenage boy trying to do the right thing. Peter Parker has survived so long because he is a flawed character, who makes mistakes and do silly human things that Superman or Batman would never do.

So yes it was selfish. But could you justifiably say that it wasn't the most human response?
Reply DisneyOtoko
08:12 PM on July 16, 2012 
Well there are other tie ins that lead up to this VILE STORY THAT SHALL NOT BE NAMED and he literally did everything both mystical and scientific to save Aunt May and actually I believe her spirit said to let her go. Her last wish was to let her go and die.

Peter's problem is that he can't accept failure and even when he does everything possible he'll still blame himself ,which I do not like! It clouds the sense of honor that made him Spider-man in the first place. Peter DIDN'T DO ANYTHING to stop the Burglar, but with the others he did everything he could and it's hero rules 101 a hero can't save everyone you can only do what you can and move on it's all about how the hero responds and copes with failure that defines a real and true hero from a wannabe that can't take the heat and is too stupid to get out of the kitchen.

Back to this pile of filth. Peter violated Aunt May's last wishes and it was purely motivated by selfishness. Love had nothing to do with it. Peter isn't man enough to deal with failure and the consequences of his actions during Civil War and seeks a bail out. Dr. Strange could have helped him, but chose not to because he A. following Aunt May's wishes, B. the wisdom and hard truth that death is a natural part of life, C. Telling Peter to grow up and accept responsibility for his poor choice in Civil War as well as to teach him a lesson that failure while sad is inevitable and must be coped with and learned from.
Now this may seem morally wrong on Dr. Strange's part letting Aunt May die when he can save her, but it's not about right or wrong (plus he's honoring the dying's wishes) it's the bigger picture of Peter's selfish behavior and how he needs to seriously get a slap in the face and wake up and to seriously reevaluate his hero career.

Also why not just have him get a divorce if they really wanted the marriage to end? it keeps the realism and if a future writer wants it to happen they could easily get back together. i also like the interdimensional being thing to take care of the secret identity thing.

Boy you have no fear trying to defend this piece of shit! Great stuff! Classic In Too Deep!

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